Bear Witness – a poem (version 2)


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  1. Ruth says:

    You’re right, it is a tough decision. I do like the second one because of the way the trees seem to guard the way to Heaven’s gate. The other tree in the first version gives the feeling of strength and I would think in a sense represents your father. I agree that both are beautiful.

    1. deenaremiel says:

      I love the second one. It actually was the first pairing we did. 🙂

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