In Dreams You Come to Me (w/photo)

In dreams you come to me, an enigma of a man
With the whispered promise
Of feathered, teasing kisses
To caress my body
Rapturously and bold

In dreams, my cloistered senses open for you
With my own whispered promise
To submit to all of your desires, and to my own
To take from you, that which you have to offer
Until we are sated
Leaving me bereft at the break of day

I’ve grown addicted to your presence
Distracted with breathless anticipation
I curse the dawn, and bless the twilight
 Ushering you back into existence
Back into my world, and my arms once again

I lay me down, and shut my eyes
Tightly, oh so tightly
Forcing my dreams to hasten their return
But oh, how foolish of me
Dreams cannot be rushed
They drift in when they are ready
And you, my dream lover, will sail into my harbor
As destiny permits

Let destiny choose this night
To be the one to last an eternity
With you and me bound by love’s immortality


©Deena Remiel, 2010.

9 Comments Add yours

    1. deenaremiel says:

      Thanks, Gracen! ❤

  1. Debra says:

    A dream that one begs to have once more.To never wake from.Awesome!!!

    1. deenaremiel says:

      And I so didn’t want to wake frmo this dream after I wrote it! Mmm…mmm! So happy that Relic will be out soon! 😀 I’m so glad that you enjoyed this poem!

    1. deenaremiel says:

      Thank you, Cynthia. 🙂 It is a favorite of mine…

    2. deenaremiel says:

      Thanks so much, Cynthia! 🙂

  2. lilithkmac says:

    oh, I SO relate to this right now….

    1. deenaremiel says:

      So glad it’s here for you, then… 🙂

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